Impulse

this is one of my favourite ones

immerse immutable
romeo in rainbows
rainbows, rainbows
colour brightly
immaculate imprint
a touch of a kiss
flying tenderly through the air
looking for
something
someone
you.

impassioned impact
words follow
trust, hope, care
immovable impression
la la la love song
sings softly
butterfly flutters
around buttercups
in green grass.

sun shines
desire
immaculate impulse
a hug
wrapping bodies in warmth
forever.

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

This had a wonderful visual quality and flowed so perfectly. I liked the way this made me feel and see something like a star burst with incredible colors and shapes being given birth right in front of me. You words are always such a pleasure to read and this is for sure a great way to start my morning off with.


Well Done!!!!!!

[FateDictates]

A beautiful curtsy bow toto you and this work. Respect..

[misscb]

This was so good... It flowed so well... Well done!!!

[Fallen Angel]

I was captivated by this! Keep it up!

[Patrica Alvarez]

A very powerful piece

I really like the flow of this and the way the words seem kind of random but work together really well. My favorite line is "romeo in rainbows".

[*** Hey Jude***]

Gary you have such a gift as you use beautiful metaphors that make this piece jump out from the page; with your imagery through words as well as the beautiful image you choose to represent this piece! Its great to be back amongst friends and talent! ~ Jude :-)

[Gillzy]

Lovely poem Gary. Each word had just as much effect as the next. Each a punchline in the beauty you were describing. There were many feelings described here, and accompanied by the picture gave an "out of this world" awesome effect. Wonderful as always x

[Staci Brown]

beautiful words and emotions... and a nice reminder of rainbows as we barely see any out here in the Arizona desert due to our lack of rain... you brought back some wonderful memories for me :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[Greg the Bard]

I love the image. The one word line is used very well. Sometimes one word lines put me off but not this very well done. "Immerse immutable" is an attention getter and wonderful opening. Line 11 is YOU I thought it should have been "MORE". Just a thought. Great write

[Abi Smith]

awesome writing. it was exhilerating to read this poem. :)