The Beatles With Love

(co-written by Truly Ross-Wisehart) Love by Beatles titles

All my loving, eight days a week
Money, two of us, the end
Come together helter skelter
Drive my car, the long and winding road
Day tripper, ticket to ride -
With a little help from my friends
I feel fine.

I wanna hold your hand
Get back across the universe.
If I fell in my life
From me to you, we can work it out
I am the walrus, the fool on the hill
Nowhere man, tax man, something -
Revolution, help!

While my guitar gently weeps,
Yesterday can't buy me love.
She's leaving home, she said she said
Hello, goodbye, it's all too much.
Oh! darling, tomorrow never knows.
Carry that weight, let it be -
I will.

She came in through the bathroom window,
I saw her standing there
Here comes the sun and I love her
Please please me, love me do.
Good day sunshine, honey pie,
All you need is love
...Don't let me down.

Reviews

[Dom]

This was so awesome! It has to be one of the best poems ive ever read. I wasn't a huge Beatles fan until I wached Across the Universe. After that, I started listening to them, and I couldn't stop. Great job! :D

[Ashesh]

Extremely Original. I myself am a BIG Beatles fan.. so reading your poem was like browsing though their discography..:) ..innovative work!!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I love this as I told True.. very very nice weaving of their songs to make a wonderful tangent poem.

Chloe

[ashley]

This is fantastic! I'm not really a fan of the Beatles lol... (Beach Boys all the way) but this is great! Good job! :D

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

This is an amazing piece of writing. I applaud your ingenuity! *bravo*

~True

[Annette Jay Sweeney]

Being a Beatles fan, I thoroughly enjoyed this. What a clever way to write a poem. Five stars from me :).

[zombiikillah666]

mhm...lucy in the sky with diamonds....la la la ...this makes me want to sing.
well, being a beatles fan, i have found that i really enjoy this (: it was fun, and witty. these are the things man-kind should live by...... also , some more things we should live by, are fabric softner. it smells good. also, eating more veggies. its important. and of course we should live by anything that devons writes about, for he is number one in my book. :D

[deeps]

This is different, I Like it though.
Very well written