Tomorrow

Tomorrow

A Poem by Miiki

What will happen tomorrow?
Will tomorrow be normal?
Will I go to school tomorrow?
Will I fall in love tomorrow?
Or will I die tomorrow?
Yesterday was a part of the past
Yesterday wasn't anything special
Yesterday was just another day in my life
Yesterday, I should've done something better with my life
Today, all I did was schoolwork
Today I didn't go outside
Today I wish I did more
Today I want a break
Today I began to wonder...
What will happen tomorrow?

© 2012 Miiki


Author's Note

Miiki
My thoughts about what could happen in the future and if I'm actually living my life to the fullest. Enjoy :)

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this was very cool, the way your formatted it, the way the words are colored, and just the poem in general.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Miiki

7 Years Ago

Thanks!
RachelReaper

7 Years Ago

welcome :)
I like the repetition here. It's incredibly effective. You have used what everyone thinks and placed it in a poem. Everyone really is wondering... what will happen tomorrow? WHAT?



Posted 7 Years Ago


Miiki

7 Years Ago

Haha, thank you!
always remember: the point of power is in the moment, and only there! The past is a major hallucination, and the future is a surprise. Nice poem. I like the "naturalness" of your poem, not trying to be anyone else but you. keep up the good work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Miiki

7 Years Ago

Thanks! I appreciate your thoughts :D
This was a good poem. That's how I think because I never have anything to do. It's really sad when I feel like I don't have a life, but at least I know sometimes I'm able too. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Miiki

7 Years Ago

Thank you! I totally agree with you.
My days are spent tomarow. This is a good poem, I like it alot. Nice job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Miiki

7 Years Ago

Thank you!

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