Children Stand Together

The innocence of children should open the eyes of adults.

Children stand together
Small hands drop coins in water
Strangers smile, souls free

Reviews

[Kenaz]

I like the simplicity of this. Not sure if it's meant to be a haiku, but I remember doing this when I was a kid. I don't remember what I wished for, but I hope they came true. Good writing.

[Jeffrey Gershom]

Thanks, Kenaz, for the review. Sorry it took so long! I haven't been on this site for a long time. If I close my eyes, I can still picture the children playing around the wishing well. Oh, the innocence of being a young child.