Pressure

Pressure

A Poem by GhostWoman
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This is my favorite one that I've posted on here besides "forgetten" (i think thats what its called) but ya, i love this one. i can just FEEL it HAPPENING.

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Down into the deep

Oxygen deprived

The pressure's building up

Right here inside.

My bones disappear

Caving on myself

The sunlights gone away

Gone away my stelth.

Precious memories

Drown just like me

Screaming so loud

The pressure captures me.

© 2010 GhostWoman


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GhostWoman
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nice rhyme and dark features give this poem a shadowy feeling of sadness
or despair withought light, I really liked it, awsome job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol. Thanks, K.

Posted 9 Years Ago


great once again(:

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on May 12, 2010
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