Broken Paper

Sadness.. and brokenness...broken Hearts..

Cut  out paper hearts

just    all  ripped up,

For every soul that's

made  there's always

going to be a  broken

heart.

Throw the ripped paper

into the wind

Make a wish.. put the pieces

back together,

ASK YOUR   Holy Father

to erase the pain take it

away so you'll forget.

Author's Note

Brokenness..Sadness.. broken hearts.. Old poem written January 22,2010

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

simply stated .. graphic metaphor ... i feel the this hopeless resignation as pieces are thrown to the wind ... it truly takes more than human endeavor to put things back together ... with faith i can sit quietly beside my pain .. blessings to you Kindred
E.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your kind words. Blessings

[Bright Ocean Star]

Benita, I can identify with this one this week, especially. My heart was broken in a sudden, mad moment that can't be undone. I think it is far worse if it is sudden...without warning. A cruel trick of fate, perhaps. However, when someone's time is up...there is little anyone can do about it. I like your idea of throwing the pieces of paper into the wind and having them reform by the will of God. Nice visual, my friend.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I thought it need to be re opened again so I put it on display as my displayed poem it is a older poem it was written January 22,2010. Thank you my friend I appreciate your kind review and comments. Blessings. Benita

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

What a beautiful piece. You paint such a stark and beautiful picture in so little words. A broken heart is truly something that no one should have to live with, But yet everyone experiences it.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I thought it need to be re opened again so I put it on display as my displayed poem it is a older poem it was written January 22,2010. Thank you my friend I appreciate your kind review and comments. Blessings. Benita

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

You're quite welcome.

[costa siwale]

Sensational poem.. I enjoyed reading this. Well written

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I thought it need to be re opened again so I put it on display as my displayed poem it is a older poem it was written January 22,2010. Thank you my friend I appreciate your kind review and comments. Blessings. Benita

[1Disawsum]

nice, short but sweet. Love the first few lines, it's true... for every soul that is made, there will always be a broken heart. Nice work

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I thought it need to be re opened again so I put it on display as my displayed poem it is a older poem it was written January 22,2010. Thank you my friend I appreciate your kind review and comments. Blessings. Benita

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful images there Benita. Sweet poem. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I thought it need to be re opened again so I put it on display as my displayed poem it is a older poem it was written January 22,2010. Thank you my friend I appreciate your kind review and comments. Blessings. Benita

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Love can be as fragile as paper, easily torn, but easily put back together again by someone who gives true love. Very good poem my new friend
anne

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

thank you I appreciate it glad you Enjoyed it. blessings

[Bluefire]

"For every soul that's
made  there's always
going to be a  brokenheart."
Very true, but the way you fix that broken heart is very lovely.
This has some great advice.
Well done! ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

thank you I am happy you Enjoyed it. Blessings

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you could repair a broken heart. Would be nice if it could work. The strong description allowed the reader to vision the paper being torn-up and flowing in the wind. Hoping for the broken heart to repair. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am glad you enjoyed it I really appreciate your kind words.