Inky paper

Inspired by when the ink of the mind won't print by Jacob erin - Cilberto written Aug. 16 2014

This paper is covered

in my fingerprints,

Words of  my thoughts

millions of them.

Ink all over my pen

on the  paper I've

made my mark,

As I sit here and

write beautiful inspirations.

My pen will stop

bleeding when  I'm

dead and gone.

My fingerprints

of inky paper.

Copyright Kindred  poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney

Author's Note

Inspired by when the ink of the mind won't print by Jacob erin - Cilberto

written Aug. 16 2014

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"ink all over my pen" ink that should have been on the paper, not me, or itself...

sometimes our feelings end up in the wrong part of our mind...and never make it a poem...
imagine all those poems that could have been written, but still lie within the brains of dead poets...

fingerprints that never became poemprints.

like this one, Benita...

flattered that my work could inspire you...
jacob

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your wise and creative review and comments so very true my friend I offend wonder about that too. I really appreciate it. That is why I love reading poets writing Inspiration can be in many different forms . You're welcome was my pleasure. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Bluefire]

This is amazing. I love the wording and the story, it makes me think of it like a music video really, black and white and with a piano.
Well done. ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for you kind review and comments I really appreciate it.Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Bluefire]

You're welcome. ^^

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Being a fellow wirier like you, of coarse I relate to this… writing is on my blood so as long as the crimson flows through my veins the ink will flow from my pen.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Didn't you mean writing is in your blood like a family member writes also was trying to figure out what you meant there I got confused here when you said this short line writing is on my blood but I understood the rest. :) more like the Imprint of God flows his creativity into me but I know when it is my flesh and not God that is why I stay away from lustful writes. or did you me the blood is you ink being spilled ??? anyhow thank you for this wonderful review and kind comments. I really appreciate it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yeah I meant in my blood, sorry… whoopsie.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

That's ok thankfully I wasn't too confused I confuse myself some days pretty bad LOL...