Even in silence it isn't the same

Even in silence it isn't the same

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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How I feel at the moment just letting go of my feelings. written Sept.16 2014

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One touch that hello

and good morning where

does it go?



Are we flying  in

a place with broken hearts

and  SCREAMING words,


Pain shattering

back and forth  off the

look glasses of life.


A silent breath nothing

feels the same anymore.


Who are you

I don't know you anymore

even when  there's peace and

silence.


But painfully I still love

you through this bleeding heart.


Do you feel the confusion

the ache the stabs in the inside.


Even in silence it

isn't the same.


In this empty room I

still see your shadow.



Just a fading memory

like you're fading

away  every day.



Where have you

gone to who are you?



I hear the giggles of

your happy memories

were they ever happy?


Everything's broken

and shattered to pieces.


Even in silence and in

the peace nothing is the

same as you're a dark place.



Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney


 

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
How I feel at the moment just letting go of my feelings.

written Sept.16 2014




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A powerful emotional ride in the poem.
"I hear the giggles of
your happy memories
were they ever happy?"
The test of love is hard. We will be tested and we must learn patience and forgiveness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your Kind and wise review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. Benita
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

I understand the poem. I hold silence now to keep peace with the wife.



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A powerful emotional ride in the poem.
"I hear the giggles of
your happy memories
were they ever happy?"
The test of love is hard. We will be tested and we must learn patience and forgiveness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your Kind and wise review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. Benita
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

I understand the poem. I hold silence now to keep peace with the wife.
I can feel the heartache in your powerful verses. When the one you love acts differently towards you it is easy to question what is going on. That is what happened to my last relationship.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the support I still have hope that things will get better God is with me a.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Years Ago

I will pray they get better, blessing to you too.

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