The Heartbreak Views

He wept silently
His world crashing down around him
He tries to stop the tears
Things will never be the same
His heart is a shattered mess
Left on the ground for him to mend
But he has given up
He doesn't want to give another chance
But he can't resist her love.
It is like a drug,
He can not live without.
He breaks other's hearts
Just to make his love happy.
But sometimes he goes too far.

She cries a silent tear.
Hidden in the darkness of night.
She fakes a smile, wants to move on
But he has a hold on her heart
One she can not break.
Instead, it shatters her,
Leaving her broken more
Every passing day
She slips farther away.
The smile fades slowly
But still she tries
And still she hides.
The pain destroys her.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

She cries a silent tear.
Hidden in the darkness of night.
She fakes a smile, wants to move on
But he has a hold on her heart
One she can not break.
Instead, it shatters her,
Leaving her broken more

[Kenzi Griffin]

uhm what
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[Sami Khalil]

A good poem...:)

[Kenzi Griffin]

lol Thanks

[Sami Khalil]

:)..........

[N!LoC]

true story ? or just a third person point of view?

[Kenzi Griffin]

The girls view is mine actually. It's my view of the way things are with someone I care about. The guys is actually odd in a way. I started writjn it my view but decided to change it to a guys view. But when I got to the third line I had a weird sensation that I wasn't the person writing anymore. It felt like I was in someone else's head writing down their thoughts and feelings in poetic form. It was really odd and I hope no one thinks me as crazy now that I've said it. Lol.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The toss and folly of this verse...and the title fits this well in the line...first you cue in on him and then her...just has a certain feel and theme...throughout the whole write...you absorb for both of them...