Flowers

I wrote this after an experience I had in 2013

For once, everything is okay

For once, nothing is in my way

For once, I don't feel any pain

For once, I don't feel insane

Do I look pretty yet?

Do I look skinny yet?

Does it matter anymore?

Now that I am on the floor?

Does anybody love me yet?

Does anybody think of me yet?

Does anybody even care?

Does anybody want me here?

The gun is loaded to my head

Thinking of the things you said

That you would rather have me dead

Just look where things have led

I have cried for countless hours

Now once a year you'll bring me flowers

At least once a year you'll bring me flowers

Please, just once a year will you bring me flowers?

Reviews

[Triston Taylor]

I like your style of writing alot, I really enjoyed reading this and broken

[GingerPocky]

Thank you for your review :)

[Briana O'Connor]

This is a very intense, vivid and emotional expression of where depression leads us. I really hope you do not feel this way, and if you do please reach out for help. I, too have been there. The poem itself was very well written. Any one who has a heart can easily feel the pain this piece expressed. Thank you for sharing and please return the favor by reviewing one of my pieces.

[GingerPocky]

Thank you for your review :)

[мalғy]

That was intense, at first I had the image of a girl in high school getting judge and down graded, and then bam completely changed which make sit worth reading in my opinion, I love twist of thoughts. Very well written :)

[GingerPocky]

Thank you for your review :)

[Marcovy Duwin]

This is really good! I enjoyed the read.

[GingerPocky]

Thank you for your review :)

[Kurayami]

This is a great poem that tells us the thoughts of a flower once it's dead.

~Kurayami

[GingerPocky]

Thank you for your review :)