Strength

This isn't my best work Ever since I started taking Prozac I've had a very hard time writing

Weakness 

Overcame me

I'm sorry that I hurt myself again

Hopeless

Was the way I felt

I'm sorry that I tried to end my life again

Shadows

Just out of sight

Made me want to give up again

Weakness

Darkness

Shadows

Hopeless

I wanted to be strong

It just hurt too much

I've been fighting

For so so long

I am weak

I cannot stand

You catch me

And take me hand

Promises

That I cannot keep

Close your eyes

So you may weep

My light

My strength 

Wont let me

Fall asleep

Reviews

[Kurayami]

Good writing. It portrays the persona's emotions well. I like how you repeated the words "Weakness, darkness, shadows and hopeless" because they were the starting word of the beginning stanzas.

~Kurayami

[wordman]

sad,sad write!throw that prozak out the door,get out f the house
and look at all the creations,feel the sun in your face,take a long walk