Sing My Little Nightingale

Sing My Little Nightingale

A Poem by G!o

Sing my little nightingale

So that I can hear your beautiful voice

So that my heart can start to rejoice

So that the world can stop the noise

 

Sing my little nightingale

I want to hear your beautiful sound

Because all day you make me proud

And it is because of you that the world I trounce

 

Sing my little nightingale

Speak out all your thoughts

Let it hurt the unbroken and heal the broken

Sweet or sour I will always listen to you


©g!o.inked

© 2012 G!o


Author's Note

G!o
Okay this is the time i must have felt really depressed and ignored for the first time because this is the first poem i ever penned in my life, when i was really young. For long i have just been keeping it in my shelve and today it hit me that i should share my first seed with the world. I know it's really short but hope you enjoy it... Cheers.

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very inspiring
keep it up
=]

Posted 6 Years Ago


Simply gorgeous. Soothing like a lullaby and very well written to say it was your first poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


G!o

6 Years Ago

Thanks Hester...each time i read it, it actually do feel to me like a lullaby...
A beautiful poem. I like the visions create by good description. Need to allow the nightingale to sing. Thank you sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


G!o

6 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote
I like this a lot, which for some reason makes me think of Keats. ( Ode to a Nightingale?) A poem of simplicity that impresses with charm. Good one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


G!o

6 Years Ago

Ode to a Nightingale by John Keats is one of my favorite poems, i read like a couple of weeks ago..... read more
This is wonderful! Some of the rhymes are forced, yes, but it's much better than my first poem, so kudos for that. I can connect with a lot of the feelings I see in the poem, though, so overall, great poem- you must have been a sweet child :) The innocence inbetween the poems is a fresh touch too.

Posted 6 Years Ago


G!o

6 Years Ago

Oh i was pretty much a doll while growing up...at least from what i have been told lol...thank you s.. read more
Arya Le Dasmones

6 Years Ago

No problem :) thanks for sharing. Also, I recently added a new poem after a long interval, so if you.. read more
G!o

6 Years Ago

Sure i must check it out...
I liked it. I have a few poems laying around I wrote when I was small, too, but they're written in horrible scribbles even I can't read. I thought it'd be cool to turn the word "speak" into "beak" third line up from the bottom, it'd have the same meaning and shapes the thoughts a little.

Posted 6 Years Ago


G!o

6 Years Ago

Hahaha i doubt if they are as horrible as you praise them to be Dyer, you've got that talent that i .. read more
Awwh, I do think that you had this was beautifully penned! You done an excellent job! It doesn't matter if it's a little short. Writing real and true poetry doesn't matter what size or length of its structures. I love the rhymes and the on-going flow too! I think that this is one of your best poems too! Keep writing and continuing the outstanding poetry! :D

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


G!o

6 Years Ago

Well i am so much glad and humbled that you loved it A.R...thank you so much, i'll keep my pen bleed.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

6 Years Ago

Haha of course I'd love it. You're a fantastic writer! :) you're welcome and that's great.
There is a sweetness about this poem that makes me think you were a child ~~~a mightily gifted child~~~when you penned this. Its charm way overcomes any lack of continuity in its rhyme scheme and its rhythm. I'm glad you chose to share this today, there must always be room in this world for innocence and little nightingales who sing their songs even above scenes of devastation.
Thank you very much for letting this one out of its cage! You did indeed cheer my day with this!
You know, it would be fantastic if there was a day on which we would all post our poetry that we wrote while so joyously young!

Posted 6 Years Ago


G!o

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Spiritwind for this overwhelming review...when i posted this piece i was not sure .. read more
spiritwind

6 Years Ago

You feared that you might not get even 1 comment --chuckle-- I see that you have many comments... I .. read more
G!o

6 Years Ago

Lol no the other ones are really sketchy and i did not feel them when writing...or let's say the wro.. read more
Retains your signiture elegance, but isn't quite as refined. It's very good, and nice to see how you've progressed. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


G!o

6 Years Ago

Thanks, i always look at this and it reminds how from twelve lines i have become who i am today and .. read more
G!o

6 Years Ago

Thanks ROMETSI...i adore looking at this because it reminds me where all i am today was born...

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