The Hunter

The Hunter

A Poem by G!o

If I’m falling will you weave your heart beneath me? If I’m dreaming will you wake me up? If I love you don’t bar me out of your heart; If I miss you let me haunt your thoughts; Is it strange that I’m in love with an angel amidst humans? One that I have never held in my arms; To see you well I close my eyes; I’ve walked this path and scars were my keepsake; Lost my keys and fear became my host; Till you came and turned my pillars from stone to salt; You’d crossed my path even before I met you; With thin hopes I never stopped hunting you; I found you and now I’m the hunted; At your mercy I ask of you; To fall in love with me at every sunset; To fall in love with you at every sunrise

© 2013 G!o


Author's Note

G!o
Okay this was a poem that i was not to let out to the world. It was just meant for the one who it was written for but then i thought of it, fireworks only color the sky when they blast...so i decided to share it with WCs...enjoy

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You write for one - you give to all...

Posted 4 Years Ago


lovely expression of love here...thanks for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thank you for sharing this Gio. It is simply exquisite. And to know it is deeply personal makes reading that much more of an emotional journey.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Excellent, lovely expression of love.
(I'm not a fan of this type of form for a poem. I believe it might have more impact in reforming it by capitalizing on your vivid word pictures you have used here. But, that's my taste, I suppose.)
Still, your loving thoughts come shining through.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Excellent... a beautiful texture to this

Posted 6 Years Ago


And a beautiful blast into the sky! Thoroughly enjoyed the read. I wonder why you didn't break the lines into more of a poetic format as that seems to be how it reads to me. Lovely thoughts. Thank you for deciding to share.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Simply beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice job too, has a lind of Elisabethan feeling ( I think !)

Posted 6 Years Ago


G!o

6 Years Ago

Yeah i was so tempted to write in that English but i decided to stick to contemporary...

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Well i love reading and i love writing and like any other writer i just want to be heard...i have a story to tell and few scars to show. I am just a boy trying to stay anonymous in this world where ev.. more..

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