The Hunter

The Hunter

A Poem by G!o

If I’m falling will you weave your heart beneath me? If I’m dreaming will you wake me up? If I love you don’t bar me out of your heart; If I miss you let me haunt your thoughts; Is it strange that I’m in love with an angel amidst humans? One that I have never held in my arms; To see you well I close my eyes; I’ve walked this path and scars were my keepsake; Lost my keys and fear became my host; Till you came and turned my pillars from stone to salt; You’d crossed my path even before I met you; With thin hopes I never stopped hunting you; I found you and now I’m the hunted; At your mercy I ask of you; To fall in love with me at every sunset; To fall in love with you at every sunrise

© 2013 G!o


Author's Note

G!o
Okay this was a poem that i was not to let out to the world. It was just meant for the one who it was written for but then i thought of it, fireworks only color the sky when they blast...so i decided to share it with WCs...enjoy

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You write for one - you give to all...

Posted 8 Years Ago


lovely expression of love here...thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thank you for sharing this Gio. It is simply exquisite. And to know it is deeply personal makes reading that much more of an emotional journey.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Excellent, lovely expression of love.
(I'm not a fan of this type of form for a poem. I believe it might have more impact in reforming it by capitalizing on your vivid word pictures you have used here. But, that's my taste, I suppose.)
Still, your loving thoughts come shining through.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Excellent... a beautiful texture to this

Posted 11 Years Ago


And a beautiful blast into the sky! Thoroughly enjoyed the read. I wonder why you didn't break the lines into more of a poetic format as that seems to be how it reads to me. Lovely thoughts. Thank you for deciding to share.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Simply beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice job too, has a lind of Elisabethan feeling ( I think !)

Posted 11 Years Ago


G!o

11 Years Ago

Yeah i was so tempted to write in that English but i decided to stick to contemporary...

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Added on February 19, 2013
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Well i love reading and i love writing and like any other writer i just want to be heard...i have a story to tell and few scars to show. I am just a boy trying to stay anonymous in this world where ev.. more..

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