Prologue

Prologue

A Chapter by Gio S.P.

She was like the smell of an old book; of fresh grass and vanilla. I remembered the gust of wind racing past her as she walked away, the smell etching itself into every fiber of my being. It killed me. And isn't it beautiful, how your body knows that it's dying from the moment that you're born, yet it does everything in its ability to keep you alive, despite the inevitable? That's how I felt about loving her. Even though we were going to die some day, my basic human instinct was to love her. From the moment I was born, despite the inevitable.
I counted the steps of her 'walk away'. I counted until she was almost out of view. I stared into the horizon of her wake until our sun swallowed the last remnants of her. And just like that, it was over. Just like that, she was gone. Autumn left me with the touch of Winter, and God, did I hate Winter.


© 2015 Gio S.P.


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This was beautifully written. Just beautiful.

It was poetic, sad & you could tell the narrator loved the woman he talks about. There were a few grammatical & punctuational errors. But other than that, fantastic job. I can't wait to read the first chapter!

- Brittney

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very nicely written! I enjoyed it, and what's to come? a good beginning!

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613
This was beautifully written. Just beautiful.

It was poetic, sad & you could tell the narrator loved the woman he talks about. There were a few grammatical & punctuational errors. But other than that, fantastic job. I can't wait to read the first chapter!

- Brittney

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gio S.P.

6 Years Ago

I changed the burp to just one (I had to keep at least one, haha) in the first chapter, thanks to yo.. read more

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Gio S.P.
Gio S.P.

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My name is Gio S.P. and I'm a writer and a poet, looking to be published. I'm 23 years old, currently residing in New York City, have an affinity for nature and am a father to three cats. If you wi.. more..

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