Suffering Mother, Rest Tonight.

Kinda personal but nevertheless about a mother dying and a child in dealing with it before she's even gone. Their relationship really falls apart towards the end of her mother's life and her regrets.

Mother may I hold your hand while you cry yourself to sleep?

Mother may I help you without you losing your pride?

Mother may I say, you look rather pale today!

Mother mother, I'm losing you and way too soon,

Mother come and talk, speak to me with your wise words,

Mother I only have stolen time to confess I love you,

Mother, will you stay awhile longer?

Mother may I say you are very anger today!

Mother may I say, I'm not coming to stay.

Mother may I leave you like this?

Mother, can I leave roses on your grave?

Mother, can I have more time?

Mother, I can confess I love you.

Mother, may you rest in peace.

 

♥

Author's Note

Again, personal. It's seems choppy to me but I'll work on it.

Reviews

[Brittany W]

i agree with your note, it is choppy and has a few mistakes, but its really a good start, its sad, i think if you can fix this up more, it could really be fantastic :)