A Poem by Gleek4ever21

I had wrote a poem about this sort of thing before but i was re-reading it and i decided to write it again better.

It lays perfectly
on the shiny
green blades
of grass.
in the way
it dances through
the wind.
So perfect
and peaceful.
So small
and majestic.
It doesn't even
have to
It just is.
It is evil
and malignant
in that way.
So cruel
and severe.
How it can
serenity and joy
when everyone
around it
is distressed
and hurt.
It can watch death
and suffering,
pain, and loss.
Can watch as someone
breaks down
losing every wall
they had up
crumble and fall.
And still always stay
so angelic.
I watch now as the daisy
sways to the song
of the wind.
I stare with wonder
and jealousy.
An urge to pluck it up
off its roots and hurl
it far out of sight
bolts through me.
But I realize,
if I tear up this
fine beauty,
there very well
might not be a next one.
An epiphany dawns on me,
a daisy can stay amicable all its life.
Hard to obtain but easy to destroy. 
Anyone could kill the poor
defenseless flower.
So in exchange for an apparent
death. It gets to be serene 
forever more.
Which I think
all of us should
work on a little

© 2011 Gleek4ever21

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Very amazing poem!!! I wish I were that good

Posted 9 Years Ago


Posted 9 Years Ago

ur poem is really nice write, do have a look to mine "QUEST OF LIFE"-
" it is about how one neglects his life ,pondering about this precious gift of nature unnecessarily ".

Posted 9 Years Ago


Posted 9 Years Ago


Posted 9 Years Ago

I love how you take an everyday thing and bring new meaning to it; an insight to the essence of what it means to be human.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on September 16, 2011
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