Verse 4: Presentation

Presentation

 

Picture is a piece of history undisturbed.

Death departs occasion on film.

Never fades who admire presentation.

Reviews

[DIVYA]

I am back to reviewing my favorite collection from you. The takeaway for me here is that death is just stop gap. We never really fade...As always...an amazing collection of thoughts...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Well...you're on a roll...with the reviews...I got a touching review today from a fellow writer and seems they are not well...but also thank them for purchasing the book...since participation here is no longer likely at the moment...thanks again...

[Latifa]

lovely and thought provoking

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Thanks for the feedback...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Beautiful, once a picture is made, it's instantely "history" yes. Moments are kept, within moments,
just another one I enjoyed...

- Elisa

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Elisa --thanks for your time and reviews...I have the picture of this moment...but did not turn out as good in the book...since its in black and white...but I look at it now and say it was meant to be that way...the clarity should not be perfect --- but dissolving...to give the feel of the write...

[Coyote Poetry]

I will return tonight and read some more. Each chapter leave me with thoughts and possibilities.
Coyote

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Thanks for reading...I'm playing catch up...Typhoon Glenda left much of the Philippines without electricity and water...us included...doing my best with coming in and out...

[Coyote Poetry]

I work the night shift. I do the heavy reading when kids are asleep. The chapters are powerful and entertaining.

[VelvetRosetta]

Amazing...I love the way you construct your verses, in so few words you have so much depth.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

As I said to Jon --- short is not me...yet I must do more with quotes like that from fellow writers here...

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Well said in all, You have a way of expressing in a depth I like that:)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I usually do not like short --- short verses...since I am compelled to say more...yet for the book...I needed to be well-rounded and have at them...thanks again...Jon...

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Ahh I understand , yeah man anytime:)