Verse 26: Epitome

Epitome

 

Will to forgive is an aspect of thinking.

Concept to forget is demise.

Forgive me for my age has surpassed.

Forget traits are useless artifacts.

Epitome of being better lacks luster.

Settling in with society governs me.

Debates with others interests only weakens.

Knowing the difference sends me on my way.

Glory out weights much the superficiality. 

Sky only looks beautiful at times of cumulus.

Ever-learning the storm is just waiting to wash away.

Another day will come to reign again to replace.

Flows are sediments of your creativity back to the ocean.

Gains nothing of forgiveness and forgets over time.

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow!. Every line could stand as a quote.
I like most this one...so relevant nowadays for too much people cannot stand without their ego...
"Debates with others interests only weakens."
So philosophical, Glen. I like this.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Thanks for your time and feedback of my work...appreciate it...

[Deuces]

Enjoyed this. I can relate to a lot of these feelings. Seems to read as the numbing that comes with age and life's daily rituals and repetition. Very philosophical and thought-provoking. Great piece, Sir.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

G Von Che --- thanks for your review of my work...this series is completed...glad you enjoyed...