Glitter's...

good peoples ashes compared to glitters...

They say,

you are gone now,

but can i believe them,

can i, how?

they say,

its just you ashes,

in this beautiful pot,

i will not name it,

this will hurt me,

a lot!

you still made me shine,

i can feel you

next to mine.

for them its ashes,

but still,

glitter of mine...

Author's Note

I am cold now...
i never had a moment to use these words....and i wish i will never use them...
but here i am...

hope you have a nice read...

Reviews

[Nirego]

You've conveyed well just how much sentimental meaning we attribute to things that others wouldn't, and probably don't understand why we feel the way we do.

[Prritiy]

a touching write.

Pray you have strength to bear the loss.

best wishes

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks my friend!^^

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)

[Laminators Dubai]

hey!
i will review you later.............im a little bit sick and busy with studies....

[Prritiy]

take your own sweet time and yes studies :) more important :)

[Prritiy]

and take care weather is changing :)

[Laminators Dubai]

yup.....its getting cold here and im allergic to everything....haha

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
You are referring to an urn ? I can confide with you Glitch. You are not alone. Although my OWN Dad's ashes were shot into space so I don't even have the liberty of an urn.

Understand all life cycles. There is an excellent chance you will create new life in time, and your love for your elders will not be forgotten but spread it's wings outward amongst those new to the world.

Anticipation, expectation, excitation. :)

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah
thank you so much for this review.

[dw817]

Hang in there. We all have loss. Sometimes it can't always be filled by our friends and family. Sometimes it's up to us to heal ourselves, and that can be especially difficult ...

[Astro]

This is a touching idea my friend.

[Laminators Dubai]

yeah...it is.....
thank you astro^^

[Jennifer Rai]

I liked it. Good write. I can feel what your poem is portraying. i have felt this before in reality.great use of words. keep it up

[Ally Baldwin]

This is so beautifully written, great job!

[Dreamer]

excellent wording. keep up the good work

[Meghan Frederick]

This has a lot of meaning to me. Thank you for putting this out there. It was very nice and emotional

[Ally Monique]

This is a very emotional piece
its hard to believe that someone is truly gone..
I love how you compared the ashes to glitter in this poem, very creative and sentimental
thank you for sharing!