Completion

Idea from https://www.writerscafe.org/Poetry1

Life makes for its own

body, with friends as the blood

and feelings the soul

Author's Note

I'm still really young (13 to be exact), but don't go easy on me for it.

Reviews

[Ashi written tale & poe..]

who am i , am a soul whole body, beautifully written.

[Kat]

"friends as the blood
and feelings the soul."
This line reminds me of completeness, it reminds me of how i feel when i'm with my friends and the feeling of happiness in my soul if this were my poem i would call it "Completeness"
It's just a thought

[HumanHotTopic]

That's a good idea...