Haiku

Haiku

A Poem by Jeremia
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10/28/14 I started writing this and then realized I had a Haiku, so I decided to post it just like this. However, I do intend to see what else I can do with it. Perhaps make a larger one of Haikus.

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Here I am again, 

Same story different time line

Alone and broken

© 2014 Jeremia


Author's Note

Jeremia
the comma is at the end of the first line because I believe it should add a little bit longer of a break right there. As if to contemplate where it is I am. I could however be wrong in that it screws up the flow?
On another note, I'm not exactly sure I have this right, in that it is 5/7/5. Might have to delete line at the end of the second verse to make it 7 rather than 8 syllables?

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Added on October 28, 2014
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Jeremia
Jeremia

St Cloud, MN



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Well, my name is Jeremia. I honestly don't believe I have much skill in writing, but I find it entertaining when I am able to crank out a poem and/or story. So my desire is to write and then get feedb.. more..

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