Divine Desire

Come to me baby

Sigh,
I thought "heaven on earth" was just another cliché until you enveloped me..
Even in the distance and silence you surround me with the most divine, loving vibrations.
You effortlessly dove into the depths of my soul's abyss and made yourself at home, I will never ask you to leave.
Oh how I love the way you speak life over me and through me, your words sing to my soul like a sacred hymn.
I whisper your name endlessly in the clouds and feel your response in the winds, you're kissing my skin gently.
Burning within me like the sun, you set my mind, body, and soul ablaze.. igniting me.
Mmmm...you make me hotter than an inferno baby...
Please let your fingers roam my body, feel my divine honey dripping only for you. I invite you to feast.
Indulge in every inch of your Queen's garden.. I'm ravenous for you.
This is what you do to me.
F**k, I need you now.

Reviews

[Jibey]

A beautifully intense poem, written in an effective narrative style. The 'diving, loving vibrations' speak of the inspiring effect of love, transcending place and time. The image 'dove into my soul' is an anticipation of the physical union, as the word becomes flesh. The kissing and burning, igniting and blazing conveys in the language of the holy spirit and divine experience that again flows into the heat of passion. Finally, the divine fingers explore the Queen's garden, with its dripping honey... and our minds are brought from the heavenly realm to the bliss of earthly pleasure. 'F**k' is the needed consummation, the vision made real.

A clever use of the divine theme and a delicious dream of longing and desire.

[Zami Mami]

Wow, I'm very impressed and very appreciative of you now. My intentions were transparent to you, I love how you dissected my words and felt every bit. This is why I write! Thank you so much for the depth, like you always do! :) May you days be as beautiful as you soul and mind! Xoxo Queen Kia

[Jibey]

I love that you love it... http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Jibey/402847/

[maria ( rose)]

wow ! BRAVO! what an awesome Poem! You set the scene just perfect the flow of the poem spoke volume with a sequence of continuous action. Great Job.
(seen your poem in the best group to get reviews and I am glad I had a chance to read.) maria

[Zami Mami]

Thank you so much Maria for taking the time to read. I'm so glad you understand what I was trying to portray. :)

[maria ( rose)]

yes !!:) and you're very welcome.

[Echoes of Eros]

Sighing, pausing in every line as if taking a breath in this divine movement, sacred flow of words and loving vibrations. You speak of heaven on earth rising around you, within you, and how you become this garden of pure delight. Your heart and soul are so filled with this intense desire, this everlasting, insatiable desire. May you find the hunger only ever growing, until you melt into the madness of loving. xo

[Zami Mami]

I'm so thankful for your sweet words always. I'm smiling knowing my message was successfully conveyed, I'm giving you a slice of my soul's pie with each line. With this divine desire growing within me, everything becomes more intense. I have my twin flame to thank for that. :)

[Echoes of Eros]

Your twin flame must be endlessly dancing in the divine desires of your souls melting into this oneness. :)