You

A poem about You, whoever you are.

Your eyes,
As beautiful and deep

As the Sea,

As piercing and great

As a hawk,

As gentle and forgiving

As a summer breeze.

Your face,

As beautiful as

A goddess,

As forgiving as

A mother,

As precious as

Any diamond.

Your figure,

Standing as proud

As a lion,

Walking as gracefully

As a feline,

Standing as still

As a statue.

You...

Only you can

Make me smile,

Only you can

Brighten the dark,

Only you can

Put fire in my heart.

Darkness is but a

Fading image,

So long as you

Are my painting.

Author's Note

Please revise this work.
I wrote it for those who wish to read it.
It is not like my other work to date but i feel it is beautiful none the less

Reviews

[LifeOrDeath]

that is the effect i wished to inspire :D

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for writing this about me. I didn't now I could inspire such a beautiful and delicate poem. I feel good right now.