When The Love Goes

When The Love Goes

A Poem by GoldenPeach
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Coping with my first breakup and heartache.

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Its the hardest when the love goes

really goes

ceases

that person no longer belongs to you

nor you to that person

It is the realization that the immense love

no matter how flawed, jealous or perfect

is over

the heartache no longer exists

it dos not matter now 

if they love again

they no longer matter

that is the hardest part,

when the love goes

so does a piece of yourself








© 2015 GoldenPeach


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This is so beautiful! I felt so many things while reading this. And yes, a piece of ourselves do disappear when the love of another goes but then you will meet that person who will fill it once again, making you more of a whole than you have ever been. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautifully captured. With every piece of you that you give, you always lose some of you when they move on. I like to think of it as a gift to them, which will linger and be a future reminder of what they will regret one day, however briefly.
We can't change ourselves because of what happens. We can learn, but to change is to give into them and prove them right.
Thank you for sharing this. I really enjoyed reading it and felt its message.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 16, 2015
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