You Can See Through It

You Can See Through It

A Poem by Llysofar

I don’t know if


This pane


Should
Be


In or out,


Cut to pieces,


Held up for a while,


Ignored completely


Painted over,


Or better still,


Make a stained glass
Feature.


Now,


This boat
Always has a mast,


Even when
The sail is down...

 

 

 

© 2007 Llysofar

© 2008 Llysofar


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word play makes this a distinct piece ... and the flow of images as smooth as glass, and that conundrum at the end, leaves us with a beautiful image and a question ...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Something about this seems so dreary, yet there is a sense of hope, particularly in the lines..

Better still,
Maked a stained glass
Feature.

Complete understated beauty.

Excellent.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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