Powder Line

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Powder Line

my mind is hazzy because the hour is late,

plus I've consumed way too much wine,

Love telling stories to anyone who listens,

is it time, for just one more line,

white powder not for the baby's behind,

not to be used for old sweaty feet,

motivate the senses that have gone lazy,

150 bucks on the street,

be very careful, about who you tell,

some can't wait, to drive a thorn in your back,

you just might find, your own private hell,

smokes worse yet, they come by the pack

So just where exactly, do you mark the line,

just how large is the mess in your life,

I suggest, you take a long long look,

the Powder line can cut like a knife

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Desert Dreamer]

Really love your poem. Coincidence is that I am reading a related book that has made me see the world a little differently, "The Natural Mind" by Andrew Weil. Perfect time for me to read this poem.

[StacyPerry]

I have waited for someone to come out with a poem about this and you did it justice. I can look back at my life and see where that led me way back when. VERY good write.

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and so well written.
I enjoyed this write.

[Ruth]

Really clever piece love, blimey, don't know if I dare look how much mess sits beside me on this journey named life lmao xx

[zombiikillah666]

i...really ... like .. .this. lol. hmm.. good job (:

[MissWordSmith]

fantastic. it was like a riddle!! why am i excited about that fact? ok, it is way too late.
anyway, nice work here. me going to snooze now. dear god i'm talking crap now
keep writing!