Another Day

 

Another Day

well another day has come and gone

and thoughts of you

still linger in my mind

it is so hard letting go

after all this time

just so hard

glances we have exchanged

sometimes angry

most times with love

we never did really

never totally understood

what it was all about

it was a about the beauty I think

the beauty of you

the beauty of life

the thought of you

will always be there

pictures of your smile ever present

I will see your face

reflecting in raindrops

as well as in my tears

I will miss your touch

if I close my eyes tightly

maybe I will feel you

I hope the dream is true

we will all meet again

in another way

the circle of life

goes on into infinity

colliding with stars

how many times

have I completed this circle

and how many more

scary stuff huh

we don't have any real clue

or do we

you seemed to have a clue

I always felt you knew something

and you wouldn't share it with me

you were tricky that way

I'm gonna miss you

I'm really gonna miss you

wow all these heavy thoughts

and know what

tomorrow when I wake up

it's just Another Day

Another Day in the Circle

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Ruth]

Intense sweetheart!
This is powerfully moving, the day can be dark for the heart when nostalgia kicks in!
xx

[Jeff]

Excellent poem. We are always looking back fondly at past loves even in the bad times.

[?]

I love the lines:

I will see your face
reflecting in raindrops
as well as in my tears

This is a very emotional 3 lines. I feel your sadness. And now I am sad for you.
I love this poem and I know that whom ever you are writing about will miss you too. Im sure they are grateful for the time you spent together.

[Coyote Poetry]

We always miss the people more when they are gone. I like the feel of the poem. To remember the good times. It takes a lot of work and emotion to create and hold on to someone. I like the ending. Few woman I have left would I want to meet again. I believe better to keep the story closed. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Liza]

i like that you used the shape of a circle, how things come full circle when you reflect on whats gone while finding a new appreciation from a distance...very insightful.

[deeps]

the circle of life
goes on into infinity
colliding with stars

Lovely lines here and truthful. This is a amazing write here.
I enjoyed this write. Makes one to ponder.