Void Was My Thought

Not everything must follow a true path. Freedom often follows lines that are but illusion.

He knew the answer but his question he seldom cared to understand.

In the fires crackle silence of are madness loomed.

A razor of truth a passion of lie.

 

Cast a memory none would recall in a common thought.

We found solice in are misery's length.

Vengence ignores fact.

Seldom do I choose to see in blindness of hope.

 

 

Cold in fire names all known well to all but me.

At books end I find a chapter apon the stage in

darkest light.

 

She clung to the pain till she held it as life.

gold in a fools key oceans of sand mask sea's  of nothing only

I see.

 

The blood was feeling and all that reminded me of life.

tears stung in a painting burried in a velvet mirage i'd

grown to hate.

 

Fruits in a ripe stage fallen into a twisted rotten fate

the pen's flowing but it's ink is but

a stranger to a once well known page 

Reviews

[Jeremy Wyatt]

Gonzo! This is a pleasure, and a wee bit different from all your other work you posted..
I could rip so many titles out the lines you write, the last verse is a killer.
Keep pounding them otu G-Man X

[Lily Mae]

I love this Gonzo.. It's more of a serious side then I've seen on Hello and I love the both of you:)xx Nice to see you here.. xxx

[The Exception]

I love the imagery you create, it's almost like a dream about a past life or something that plays in your head.
I really love it.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Great to see you here my friend, welcome ; )

[fargone]

hey, john boy! i really love this piece. u know i always liked ur "straight" writings and this is definitely one of ur better ones. great imagery here. great stuff.

[Pebbles]

Gonzo u got here! and about time too I say ... brilliant write amigo ...........sooo glad u found us :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Wow, Gonzo.. I could get lost forever in your imagery... so vivid and lively, refreshing and new. This piece gives me the sense of memory flashbacks with a touch of longing and regret. It is beautifully constructed.

Glad to have you here btw! Have missed you!

[Judy Ponceby]

Wonderful write, your images are beautiful.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

With a shout the sun kissed the hand of the poet releasing his pen's heart to once again know the love of the page. Beautiful Gonzo. Good to see you