Feet

Feet

A Poem by Mystery Girl
"

Lovely things....

"

I wake up in the moring.

Stretching out my feet.

My toes are touching yours now.

The feel so sliky, and so sweet.

Our legs are intertwined now.

As I sunggle up for a kiss.

I am soo glad your mine now.

Playing footsies is the best!

© 2008 Mystery Girl


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Nothing better than playing footsie with a pair of silky soft feet! Loved this poem. By the way, on the forth line down, I believe the should be they. Excellent poem otherwise!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Do you mean "you're" rather than "your"? This may not seem like a big deal to you, but this leads me to question other things, such as what is meant by, "The feel so sliky"; should this really be, "The feel so silky"? "They feel so silky"?

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very lovely, and cozy poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very adorable poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww thats cute. =]

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 11, 2008
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Mystery Girl
Mystery Girl

Fenton, MI



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I am a fun loving girl. Who loves her life. Loves to write,draw. I also love to act in community theatre plays. I have been in Wizard Of Oz,Annie Get Your Gun,Greease,and more. I love to take tap,ja.. more..

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