Sleep now.

Sleep now.

A Poem by Mimi
"

Sing it to the rhythm of twinkle twinkle little star.

"

Sleep now, sleep now, baby boy.

Here, love, take your favorite toy.

Close your eyes and you will see,

Just how nice it feels to sleep.

Sleep now, sleep now, baby boy,

Here, love, take your favorite toy.

© 2009 Mimi


Author's Note

Mimi
A lullaby I wrote for my future son.
Picture from http://rlv.zcache.com/sleeping_baby_poster-p228130325649226230trma_400.jpg

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Definitely peaceful. This something I could slip into a peaceful sleep to for sure.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful and peacful

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is very sweet and kind-hearted.
~D♥m♥~

Posted 14 Years Ago


That is soo sweet, I love writing for my kids..its theraputic. And now youll have this lullaby for him to remember always, and maybe someday he will sing it to his kids! Im about as sentimental as they come :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very beautiful, sweet, and well written.
If you had this longer, you can create this as a lullaby.
Cute picture chosen, too.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very sweet. Its nice to just relax sometimes.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well, i must say, very beautiful piece uve written here. Warm, Gentle, loving. Good job!

B.A.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Dear Jamie,

Simple and sweet as an infant. Gentle. Comforting. Very nice.

Sometimes the simplest and most direct of sentiments is the most heartfelt and powerful.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww its sweet! Very cute, i like it :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


This would be a darling song to sing to a baby.. lullabies are so sweet and even sweeter when we create our own for our young. You seem a bit young yet to be contemplating a future child but I think I can understand the draw! Why not try it with someone's crying baby.. like a relative's child.. babies are cute but you will find alot of work! This was very beautiful and creative.. if it's your dream to create children's theme writings you are very well on your way! Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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