withered roses

withered roses

A Poem by Gothicmummy98
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short romantic despair

"
Leaves danced along the ground
bloodied roses petals
now withering
as the fall befell 
for love without pain 
there is no beauty
cause even the prettiest of roses 
do indeed have thorns~
-silver

© 2024 Gothicmummy98


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The plant can hope for an another bud bloom rose.... but sill not the same rose.... beautiful write!!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Your poem is so brief and I think that adds to its impact. It delivers a poignant message. And dear Gothicmummy98 you did it without unnecessary words. Keep writing thanks for a great share!

Aarti Sriram

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Indeed, some of them even have knives.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 12, 2024
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Candyland, AL



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