In Love with a ghost

Dreams are another side of realities.

I fell in love with a ghost,

with eyes as blue as the open sea.

So deep, so hypnotic and strong...

I could easily drawn on it.

We met in a dream at night,

and he flirted with me with such a charm,

that I gave him my heart in a bliss...

oh ghost with eyes as an abyss.

I wish I could dream a little  longer,

to have some more little time with him,

my sweet lover,

the ghost,

who came to me in a dream. 

Author's Note

Just tell me what you think. Please.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A nice poem .
I like :
We met in a dream at night,
and he flirted with me
with such a charm.

[Shandra Sun]

Thank you Sami.
He really did firted! Such a pity it was just a dream.

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling

[Allendorker]

I love the way you described his eyes. In the forth line, perhaps you meant "drown in it" instead of "drown on it"?

[Shandra Sun]

Yes, thanks.

[Shandra Sun]

My sweet friend, how enchanting it can be to be in love with a ghost...
I do feel your haunting words, the tears into the wish, the dream, the longing. Such a sweet and loveble write here. Sometimes we can see them so vividly in our dreams. You really took me there. Thank you dearest.

Xx Eli

[Shandra Sun]

Yes...I can sense you know what I'm talking about. So grateful you can resonate with it.That was a very vivid dream indeed. Maybe it was my soulmate I do not know...yet. Much Love.

Maybe... glad you speak out your visions rich person... you should do always, I admire your skills.