Her Darkness

Cool, damp and black,

She is trapped inside the belly of a whale.

She had accepted her fate.

Gave up on getting help,

Gave up on yelling out to people,

Who weren't actually there.

Please: 

Be with her in the night;

As she reaches out in the dark,

She will be reminded by your warmth,

That she is not alone.

 

Everything will be okay. 

Reviews

[CreativeStroke]

This was good Gracie. It had a hint of mystery to it, for me. Your last line was a great conclusion.

[littlewhitebird]

"Everything will be okay", nice closing line.

[zainul]

A great note of inspiration as a well wisher.
This is very wonderful work.
Enjoyed reading.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

A lonely walk with sorrow without realizing we're not alone. Good read and write.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Someone's crying for help? Help her. Her dark nights maybe lessen if you show even little shadow of your light. Let her feel you are with her.

Nice work.