Details

Have you ever noticed;
The holes on the moon
Sand in a lagoon
Or the pollen in a flower?

Have you ever seen;
The cracks on a lip
A freys in a rip
Or the brickwork on a tower?

All these things I notice first,
If I didn't I might just burst.
The way my life is well perceived,
My world is full of the sad and grieved.

Take into account the luck you got,
Since your day one you've had a lot.
Compared to many starving each year,
To my own green eyes I shed a tear.

Details in life have brought me afar,
Each beauty and gem what wonders they are.
Or the suffering caused by our greed and hate,
We can stop this now, it's never to late.

Reviews

[Neon]

Details in life have brought me afar,
Each beauty and gem what wonders they are.
Or the suffering caused by our greed and hate,
We can stop this now, it's never to late.

What a beautiful stanza you penned! Nice work, it's a great way interpreting the beauty of the world to live with peace at all ... I love how the beauty, the freys you dropped into the words to let everyone know how beautiful is it in the world to live in at all .. Greatly penned!

100/100!

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!! ;)

[Neon]

My pleasure, I always love making angels ever happy :)
So, keep smiling!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Brilliant poem. You have out standing talent. :) great write.

Kaze~

[Lexi Jackson]

Thankyou very much, I'm glad you like it ;)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. It was my pleasure. :)

[KeeD]

For someone your age to write such a smart and compassionate piece, filled with a lesson and inspiration to the youth and all alike.. to look at their lives and see the details no matter how miniature they are. Positive, motivational, brilliant. Great write.

[Talesha]

Absolutely amazing.So beautiful and true.I love this poem so much.Excellent job.
Best wishes,
T.M

[Lexi Jackson]

Thanks for reviewing! Glad you liked it :)

[The Nude Writer]

Great point. It is all in the details :)

[Lexi Jackson]

Yeah thanks for reviewing glad you liked it ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoy poetry that had purpose. This poem does.
"Take into account the luck you got,
Since your day one you've had a lot.
Compared to many starving each year,
To my own green eyes I shed a tear. "
The goal of a writer is to teach and remind. Your poem remind us to open our eyes and see the real world. Good and bad. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you very much, I really try to put done meaning behind my work, do I'm glad you found it :)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Aw, Lexi, this was beautiful. :) I really loved this one so much!

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you very much I thought as a new year was coming it was a new beginning so this was perfect ;)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Awww yeah :) it was perfect for a new year!

[Ryan]

I love your fourth stanza, it brings light into an area most people don't stop to realize. Its hard to take life slow and realize the details of things. Great poem though, I really like it. It's a great idea and you could write a whole bunch on it since there's so many details that go unseen!

[Lexi Jackson]

It's really as sometimes we take life and the things around us for granted. So I just wanted to write about my point of view. Glad you liked it :D

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

This is a sweet and interesting write. a wonderful Perspective.

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you :)

[Josh Dollar]

Really good poem. It's a very inspirational poem.

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you very much I'm glad you enjoyed it ;)