Swirling Leaves

From a prompt

The music screams into her ears

Drowning out any thoughts she might have had

hiding in her head

It was autumn

And it was beautiful

With the leaves swirling around

A multicolored chaos against her green hoodie

But today, the sun was hiding

And the wind was blowing

And it was very cold

But the music sang a different tune

And all she could bother wondering about

Was what it would feel like to have

Leaves in her hair

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[xhannyx]

'A multicolored chaos' I loved this! How you described the leaves falling was very creative!

[C. Rose]

leaves in her hair, against her green hoodie, and different tune are my favorite bits of this.
I love anything to do with autumn and leaves.
With this piece I could imagine myself in her shoes.

Thanks for sharing.