Fragile Broken Things

Written 2/8/15. Trusting you with the most fragile thing I have.

Let the endless bleeding cease
I don't want to feel this anymore
My heart is lonely
And at times feels like
It's broken in pieces
If I rip it out
And give it to you
Maybe you can
Stitch it back together
I apologize
For getting blood on your hands
But I'm trusting you
With the most fragile thing I have
(End)

Reviews

[ANTO]

Deeply heartfelt writing Ashley - directly from the soul - who wishes to only find love - no pain - no drama - just good old fashioned love. Honest to God poetry.
well penned :)

[GreenEyedPoet]

Thanks Anto! That is honestly one of the most important things to me - to find true love, or as you put it good old fashioned love. :)

[Anne Verona]

Wow.. uhm.. I literally have no words.. This is beautiful and I don't know how to praise or describe the feel of it enough to give justice to it. Giving someone your broken self... it's a huge... huge jump. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful poem :)

[GreenEyedPoet]

Thank you Anne! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. :D

[Anne Verona]

No problem :)

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this is potent writing, Ashley... offering a broken, bleeding heart to someone you hope will help mend it... many of us can relate to this having had our hearts broken...i hope your tailor has gentle hands... love the red text, by the way, nice emphasis... well-done!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Thanks FT!
When my tailor comes along, I'll let you know if he has gentle hands. :)

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I appreciate it... :) and you are quite welcome!!