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A Creature Like Me.

A Creature Like Me.

A Poem by GreenSkeleton16

First poem I ever wrote. 8th Grade.


Down The Dark Dreary Walls
That Reflect A Shadow Of Light,
Lies A Painting So Deadly,
Yet Captivating My Site

In The Painting I See,
A Creature Like Me,
Looking So Free,
Intimidating Me.

The Evil In Her Eyes,
And The Sorrow In Her Mind
This Person Could Only Be

Shocked And Disturbed,
I Ran From The Painting
Passing Each Room,
The Fear Still Remaining
I Thought I Was Safe,
But To My Surprise
The Tears Were Still Falling
Down From My Eyes

Through The Fear I See,
A Creature Like Me,
Looking So Free,
Intimidating Me

I Gasped...

© 2011 GreenSkeleton16

Author's Note

I don't think its finished yet...seems unfinished...I'll finish it one day...

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I liked this idea a whole lot, I think you brought it together nicely. Great concept, and great rhymes. Good to see you back around too!

Posted 9 Years Ago

For a first effort, that's pretty amazing! Most write for years before reaching this depth!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on January 6, 2011
Last Updated on May 23, 2011
Tags: creature, poe



Arlington, TX

My passion is Music. My heart is poetry. My mind is spiritual, and this earth needs love. more..