Plastered Paint

Plastered Paint

A Poem by GreenSkeleton16
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poem about being scared that after death love is no more and what we made on earth doesn't matter anymore.

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Lost in a world plastered in paint.

Smeared from this existence,

without a complaint.

Time involves distance,

life stays the same.

People tend to think of love as a game.

 

Fear that one day life is no more,

remembered by people you chose to ignore.

Can’t let you know this pain that I feel,

cant bare to show you the hurt I conceal.

Won’t let you see I’m scared to be here.

Won’t let you whisper your love in my ear.

Can’t let you do this,

it’s you that I miss.

Reminisce

how I felt after love's first kiss.

© 2012 GreenSkeleton16


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i felt the same way, until i realized that even if love is no more after death, we should make the most of today and not worry about tomorrow. or at least that's my philosophy, i don't want to tell people how they SHOULD feel. maybe i should have worded that differently....
but this was beautiful, regardless. keep up the good work, i've read great things from you!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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a beautiful poem...as bittersweet as life itself...
P.S.- A typo.methinks you missed an apostrophe in the last line-'loves'.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the existential theme of this a lot. Your rhymes are perfect, as usual, and as is your pacing! You really capture the idea of nothingness and the fear one could have upon realizing. Fantastic write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i felt the same way, until i realized that even if love is no more after death, we should make the most of today and not worry about tomorrow. or at least that's my philosophy, i don't want to tell people how they SHOULD feel. maybe i should have worded that differently....
but this was beautiful, regardless. keep up the good work, i've read great things from you!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fear that one day life is no more

remembered by people you chose to ignore

that really struck me. the whole poem is very powerful with very deep meaning, but especially so for that particular line.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was really good!!! so easy to read and so very poetic!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Although you have captured the essence of the uncertainty of life and love perfectly, you need not fear. You will be remembered for your amazing talent. If I wasn't alone right now, I would start a wave. Beautiful, oh green one!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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nice!! I like that you change up the rhyme scheme going into the couplets in the second stanza (and end of first) - nice flow!! great rhymes! great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on February 11, 2011
Last Updated on March 10, 2012
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GreenSkeleton16
GreenSkeleton16

Arlington, TX



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My passion is Music. My heart is poetry. My mind is spiritual, and this earth needs love. more..

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