Like A Cloud

Like A Cloud

A Poem by Chantavong

Blow me in the right direction with your everlasting breath..

Like a cloud in the sky
you make me feel so high
so weightless but still alive
you lift me up and take me for a dive
just floating in the wind
my life is always on a limb
you control my destiny
because you have the best of me
without you there is no action
my life would have no satisfaction
you shape me to become what I'm destined to be
a compliment to you brings out the best in me
guide me on the safest path in this life
because you, you give me life
the push behind the box cart
the 'squishees' inside of Kwik-E-Mart
without you there is no meaning to me
the absence of you is the death of me
because like a cloud in the sky
you make me feel so high
you are the wind, and I am the cloud
to my father up above I hope I make you proud..

© 2010 Chantavong

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This is really sweet. It's a wonderful feeling to to be completely uplifted by another precense in your life.

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