Unconditional Love

Unconditional Love

A Poem by Greg Skura

I Loved You Before We Ever Met
My Love Is Yours Forever Yet

I Am With You Forever As A Friend
And Like A Willow I Will Bend

When The Day Seems To Never End
I Will Set You On Your Feet Again

Gods Love Flows Through From My Heart
When We Are Near Or Far Apart

And When We Go Our Separate Ways
Love All All Love Is The Only Way

© 2009 Greg Skura


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Loving before one ever met meant you had a notion of the love you could provide. The willows root actually grows larger below ground than the tree grows round. The roots constantly looking for a food source. To feel love near or far. to only love one way is beautiful...it's the only way to love! Wonderful write!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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"And Like A Willow I Will Bend"
-This is the strongest line of this poem. A good concrete metaphor as long as you are referring to the bending vs breaking. You can shape into what your love needs without ever breaking or losing strength. This point in itself is a good subject for a poem.

The lines "Gods Love Flows Through My Heart / When We Are Near Or Far Apart" might be a bit over kill. God's love is unconditional, but to insinuate you love this person like God does seems like you are trying too hard to make this love unworldy. Would would be really cool if you replaced the first line with a metaphor about something that does not change relations no matter the distance.

The poem works because the meter is traditional and constant. Very lyrical and intriguing to interpret and apply.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loving before one ever met meant you had a notion of the love you could provide. The willows root actually grows larger below ground than the tree grows round. The roots constantly looking for a food source. To feel love near or far. to only love one way is beautiful...it's the only way to love! Wonderful write!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you have captured the essence of human relations, brillliant!

blessings
vincent

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This flows nicely. I kind,. simple poem indeed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gently flowing, comfort comes from the metered lines. Lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


very touching.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Greg Skura
Greg Skura

Pickering, Durham, Canada



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