Liberty

America's National Lady.

Liberty



They hear Her calling
Liberty, the Seven-Horned
Goddess of Freedom

Author's Note

Don't like it, keep it to yourself.

Reviews

[Michael X]

.. wow-- the seven horned goddess of freedom- seriously i wonder if that could be related to bible prophesy -because your words draw the reader to delving ponderous appreciation for lady liberty..
I really enjoy the way you capture haiku poetry.. you have a real nack for identifying the essence
of the meaning in light of picturesque imagery that not only delivers the vision- but leaves the
reader feeling effected by the way in which the details are formed. Majestic-Invigarating-Talented

"They hear Her calling
Liberty, the Seven-Horned
Goddess of Freedom

[PianoandPage]

awesome haiku (or senyru)

"seven horned" really keeps this tipped delicately between admiration and sardonic humor.

i like that we can take it as either. is she a beast or a beauty? maybe both.

also... just a note about your author's note, are you saying you don't want constructive criticism or have you just been slammed that much?

[Ralphy]

I like this...nice write Rough...