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Lost

Lost

A Poem by Greystone

There comes a time,

in every night,

where all the night is day...

 

And all that world

is gone away

while I dream

Of Azrael's Fangs

 

My heart cast asunder

in favour of blood

 

And I wish

he would not

force me

to love him

 

But I am powerless

to resist him

the tears that dwell

in my empty green eyes

watch birds fly away,

free

 

I remember

another Vampyre

with long, glistening fangs

and a tinkling laugh--

which dares to sound of bells

 

I remember,

trusting,

and flying,

when he was my wings,

and he stole my life,

forever.

 

What can one expect

of this once-living prince

do I expect Hell?

Heaven?

Is it my heart  

he will collect again? 

 

But the little broken peices

are harder

to find

than he realizes

 

All alone in this grim day-night...

 

 My sun fades to gray....


All my heart's little peices

Scream to fly

Even though 

I have no wings,

and surely,

will die

 

 

© 2008 Greystone


Author's Note

Greystone
Poetry is really not my strong suit, but I decided to write a poem inspired by past events for my newly joined group, Cloaks and Daggers. Last verse was added spontanenously due to editior. Pretty sure I've spelled 'spontaneously', I know, I know, bad Elly...

Enjoy!

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Okay Cloaks and Daggers, I like the addition of plurality, there, let's keep that. Would you like to have it. I have never been one much for hording credit. Some people takeit quite to the extreme, or so I've noticed.
I want to add this piece to my personal favorites. I feel that as it has distracted me on a personal level that to speak on it any further would be a discredit to you. I intend to return to this. I am enjoying your current avatar picture, BTW. A tasteful piece of art is no doubt a breath of fresh air on this site. Excellent piece of writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Okay Cloaks and Daggers, I like the addition of plurality, there, let's keep that. Would you like to have it. I have never been one much for hording credit. Some people takeit quite to the extreme, or so I've noticed.
I want to add this piece to my personal favorites. I feel that as it has distracted me on a personal level that to speak on it any further would be a discredit to you. I intend to return to this. I am enjoying your current avatar picture, BTW. A tasteful piece of art is no doubt a breath of fresh air on this site. Excellent piece of writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rare are the times when we read such a piece of work like this...
I can sense the world you have created that characterizes your past events and expeience...

For me it's a good work...
Keep it up...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you are a very good poetess, I really liked this poem. And I too belong to Cloak and Dagger.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What are you talking about...poetry doesn't get any better than this. It is absolutely amazing. Loved it much.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this piece. Something very evil and mysterious. Great job.
Lexie.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice write.Great job. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow...I like it it reminds me of twilight....I guess its the whole vampire thing, Keep it up.



Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The last line is meant to sort of link with the opening line, give it a feeling of closure. ^^

Thank you, dear!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Well, I liked it. I like the darkness of it. Not sure about that last line though, but the rest was extremely well done. Kudos.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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