Fury

Fury

A Poem by Greystone

Snarl

Die

By sunlight

Blistering, burning, white-hot, furious

Die

By fangs

Sharp, angry, waiting, watching

Die

 

© 2009 Greystone


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Author's Note

Greystone
I got really, really, really angry when I wrote this. Like 'I'm-going-to-tear-your-face-to-bits-if-you-blink-too-much' angry. Don't expect reviews here.

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You can really feel your anger in this poem making it intense and powerful, especially because of the use of the 'ing' in this, the short, sharp lines also help to reinforce that anger. I love the images:

By sunlight
Blistering, burning, white-hot, furious
Die





Posted 11 Years Ago


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Greystone
Greystone

Fort Atkinson, WI



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I've been writing for about five years. Mostly, I focus on fantasy, although to be honest I've dabbled horribly in Romance, Science Fiction, and modern-day roleplays. I enjoy drawing, painting, wood c.. more..

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