Broken Lines #3

Broken Lines #3

A Poem by CookieMisfit1969

When did the clouds go dark?
I never noticed.
Was it because my eyes
were always filled with tears?

© 2017 CookieMisfit1969


Author's Note

CookieMisfit1969
When life already sucks and it just gets worse. What a life. Although I do believe there's a rainbow after the rain :)

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Honest words led to the proper ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


first off the font and color changes are fantastic! doesn't always work but it grabbed me right away .. and the length makes this a tightly written morsel of deep sorrow ... i love it .. well said .. nothing to add nor subtract in my mind! really fine emotive poem ... universal and relatable
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


CookieMisfit1969

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I always wanted my sadness to reach to the world. I wanted it to inspire everyo.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

we can all use that kind of camaraderie and comfort in suffering ... no doubt about it!
yes, there is a rainbow out there...but sometimes as your poem indicates...we can't see through the tears...and we are fooled because we think the tears are rain.

Posted 3 Years Ago


CookieMisfit1969

3 Years Ago

I spent so much time crying my eyes out that I forgot there are people around me ready to help. Than.. read more

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Added on October 20, 2017
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CookieMisfit1969
CookieMisfit1969

Philippines



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Hey there! Nice to meet you! CookieMisfit1969 here. I'm a 17 year old emo writer who keeps spouting nonsense when she write. Just a random kid you would bump at the street and don't spare another glan.. more..

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