Fathoms

Daily haiku

Beauty is a thing

Both shallow as a puddle

And still fathoms deep

Reviews

[Solipsis-tard]

It's brilliant how you've painted such an amazing picture using just a few lines. And it's awesome how a poem that tries to define beauty, falls in the definition itself!

[Bella-Marie]

Oooooooooh....
OOOOOOOOOOH....
You get it. It was really, really, really profound and you did SUCH a good job because it was a hiaku and you had to write about beauty in seventeen sylables! :O You did an amazing job. Japanese poets are envious...