You Wouldn't Understand

You Wouldn't Understand

A Poem by just another guy...
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i've been a complete mess about this.

"
you wouldn't understand 
      how much i love you.
you mean everything to me.

      i can't have you 
because you have a boyfriend
      and it sucks so much

knowing that the love
      of your life
won't ever love you back.

      the way you love me 
is sooo much different
      from the way i love you.

you won't understand
      you'll never understand
the love that i have for you.

© 2012 just another guy...


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Omg!!! This is how I felt when my current boyfriend had his old boyfriend Stephen is was soul crushed then they broke up now I have my love Brandon but I love your poem and I'm sorry you can't. Have your love Hun I truly am, I hope some day you will get this Pearson you speakith of

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Scary how well I can relate to this. I remember falling in love with my best friend Kyle and knowing and being told that he didn't love or feel for me that way at all. It hurt seeing him date other girls and getting treated like crap, when he and everyone knows I wouldn't treat him like that. He forced me to push my every feeling I had for him away. Falling for someone like never before, then having to act as if those feelings for them don't exist just because they don't feel the same way. It's probably one of the toughest things I've had to do in my life.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Omg!!! This is how I felt when my current boyfriend had his old boyfriend Stephen is was soul crushed then they broke up now I have my love Brandon but I love your poem and I'm sorry you can't. Have your love Hun I truly am, I hope some day you will get this Pearson you speakith of

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A sweet poem...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The complications of love will never cease to amaze you...And the hold a person can have over your heart is not an easy concept to grasp...but the feelings we feel make us special...they make you...you.
P.s. your honesty will take you far...and as for your writing well..the beauty of it has already arrived...it's splendid

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sweet and sad at the same time....I think many people can relate to this nice work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is amazing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and sad. I know how it feels to have the one you love be in love with someone else:/ You portrayed the situation very well. Nice job!
God Bless
~Mickey

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sad. :( In a somewhat different way, I feel like I can relate. I'm sorry you had to have an experience like this.
You did a great job, though, taking the emotions and putting them into words. Nice write. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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just another guy...
just another guy...

Des Moines, IA



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name's damien. sixteen (almost seventeen) 1. Had sex? Yes 2. Bought Condoms? Yes 3. Gotten somebody Pregnant? Not that I know of.... ...4. Failed A Class? Yes 5. Kissed A Boy? Yes 6. Kissed A .. more..


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