Walk Together

Walk Together

A Poem by Gulaab

Beauty, love, insatiable desire

All that is adored, is wanted.

Insinuating meaninglessness

Is cruel and incomprehensible (for the maddeningly Sane)

 

As we (all) walk, we walk together

But simply because we walk

We traverse though life to

Find another to walk beside each other.

 

As we walk we see

As we see we talk

As we talk we understand (one another)

As we understand, we walk

 

To find another we must see.

To see (though) is not enough

That is why we must talk (to understand)

Then and only then can we see (ourselves and each other)

Then and only then can we (truly, lovely) walk (forever)

Then and only then are we together.

© 2011 Gulaab


Author's Note

Gulaab
Ignore grammar. I would really like any sort of feedback, really any thoughts at all. Not only/simply whether it was enjoyable/good, but also if any stray thoughts popped into your head, please let me know, (please share.)

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Gulaab
Gulaab

New York City, NY



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