The Poet Of Loneliness

The Poet Of Loneliness

A Poem by Giulia King

She was an old soul,
desperately trying to find the meaning of her life. 
She couldn’t decide which world she liked better. 
The one her body was in, 
or the one her mind liked to escape to once in a while.
Like a broken flower, she hides her thorns from the cold world. 
Hoping immensely that there is an end to everything that is draining her spiritually. 
She had a wandering pen and an endless imagination.
Writing gave her a sense of freedom and happiness. 
She was the poet of loneliness.








© 2017 Giulia King


Author's Note

Giulia King
This is not one of my best pieces.. Just a scribble. x

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I feel this way sometimes; just thinking what is to come and what is the purpose. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 10 Months Ago


'The Poet Of Loneliness'
Hiullia King,
I understand the reference to, "She was an old soul." I think that people just get tired. Our lives require so much of us after all. It feels like a game sometimes...seeking clues, or answers for how to fix problems and help ourselves and others at times.
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 12 Months Ago


I could see myself in this poem. Especially in these lines "She couldn’t decide which world she liked better.
The one her body was in,
or the one her mind liked to escape to once in a while."


Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

I'm glad I'm not alone then :)
This writing made me leap on the inside. I like your style.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!
Deep thoughts do make a pretty good poem. I loved it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your sweet words :)
So many "me"s in this world of I's... sigh...anyways

Seem you are defining the person you are(?) by the person you want to be...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Tbh, I don't know what I'm doing.
This word "SOUL" is this your favourite word? just asking

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

2 Years Ago

Soul is not just a word. I can write a book about it's importance
The earth (Titan maphaha)

2 Years Ago

Ya you are right I see it appearing more often on your poetry
i love it...just love it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much :)
Such a great portrayal the dilema's a creative person can face. I feel a sense of not fitting in with world due to all the wicked and evilness, with the imaginative escape bringing limited, but highly reinforced comfort. This will speak loudly to so many!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your lovely words here, Owen! :)
Couldn't decide which world she liked better? I love that concept.

I would invite you not to talk your writing down to us in your notes.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

2 Years Ago

Why not? I can be open about the things I feel and write about.
Shannon

2 Years Ago

Of course you can. It's your work.

That's why it was merely an invitation, not the .. read more

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