A Part Of My Soul

 I crave love.

  The deepest, purest, rawest form of love. 

  The kind of love where it hurts.

I crave you. 

My ray of light. 

You are the sunlight through the windows of my room.

  You are someone I can write about endlessly, 

  never getting tired of writing about how you are my sole galaxy in this dark universe.

  My beloved one, 

  I want to write about how every word that falls off your lips 

can put poetry to shame.

I'm always soft for you, 

you brought my stone cold heart to life.

I want to kiss you lazily like we have all the time in the world 

and also urgently, like there’s no tomorrow.

I may not be able to hold you in my arms forever, 

but trust me when I say;

you’ll forever be in my words,

 in my poetry, 

in my heart,

and always, a part of my soul.

Author's Note

Thank you for loving me the way you do. x

Reviews

[KWP]

I crave the love that doesn't hurt - the love that's always there - the love that will envelop us without expecting a single thing in return - the love that comes when you finally put aside your craving / wanting / need ... now that's an endless love

I like the sentiment of your poem ... best wishes for the muse X

[Giulia King]

I like your little poem. Thank you for reading :)

[KWP]

Haha that was a comment not a poem 😃

[Giulia King]

Hahaha sorry but I really liked it! 😂

[Fanicia E.]

After reading your poem, I immediately added it to my favorites. I loved it! I have never come across a piece that so perfectly describes the intense longing and selflessness that comes with being in love. Wonderfully and masterfully done.

[Giulia King]

That makes me so happy! Thank you so, so much, Fanicia! :)

[Fanicia E.]

I'm glad I could put a smile on your face. You're welcome!

[Alessander]

"You are the sunlight through the windows of my room."

Fav lines.

Emotive. Descriptive. Almost divine.

Maybe it's because I'm writing from a dark room myself and this made me briefly feel a light.

"I want to kiss you lazily like we have all the time in the world
and also urgently, like there’s no tomorrow."

I think this perfectly captures the scope of true love. The celestial and terrestrial. The poetic and prosaic.

[Giulia King]

I'm happy you found something that you like, Alessander :) A million thanks!

[KCthelastboyscout]

I assume this person was the love of your life or in your imagination you want to find a person who will make you feel this way. This is beautifully written.Something enjoyable to read to caress your heart

[Giulia King]

Thank you for your lovely words and for always putting a smile on my face :)

[Chase Dylan]

I rarely use the word "sensual" in reviews, but this cusps that line between smoother than glass and bolder than bold... It flits between the ups and downs of passion within a pristine meter and flow... Very romantically penned... Gotta love love...

[Giulia King]

Gotta love love indeed. Thank you for your lovely words, Silente! :)

[Chase Dylan]

A pleasure

[Coyote Poetry]

After we had tasted true love. We try to reach again dear Giullia.
"My beloved one,
I want to write about how every word that falls off your lips
can put poetry to shame."
The above lines are true. When surrounded by love. No better days and nights. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading, dear friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Giullia.

[Pule Leeuw]

It Says most things i struggle to put to words. I am more intoxicated with how each section begins with what appears to be a heading but to me sounds more like a different yet growing deeper statestage of love.

Thanks for the journey :-)
Well worth reading.

[Giulia King]

I'm so happy my piece took you on a journey! :) Thank you for reading!

[Najam Us Saher]

You made me feel that passion and love you've described. I loved the third stanza most above all. This poem is heart touching. Beautifully written.

[Giulia King]

I'm happy my piece made you feel something. That's my goal in my writer life. I want the reader to think and feel when they're reading my poems. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Enjoyed reading ths ☺

[Tony Jordan]

Awesome (check my reviews - I never use that word!)
But I guess you're preaching to the converted (n my case, having been lucky to have experienced this once in my life) - to clumsily use an oft coined phrase because you aren't 'preaching' per se...you're allowing the reader the feel that wondrous thing called love (in it's purest sense).
Awesome ! D****t - that's becoming annoying already.
:))

[Giulia King]

That's true, you never do. I feel special :)) Thank you so much, TJ! I'm happy you like my piece. Awesomesauce, lol.

[Tony Jordan]

Lol - welcome Gullia
:)

[Pete]

wow. doesn't get much deeper than this. such passion & raw emotion. we all want to be loved and to have someone to love. so many great lines. especially love the opening and "You are the sunlight through the windows of my room." the feelings expressed here will surely melt a heart. outstanding. you've outdone yourself ...

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much for your lovely review, dear Pete :) Your words mean a lot to me!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I love this. Especially the lines:
"I want to write about how every word that falls off your lips
can put poetry to shame."

So beautifully written as always, Gullia (:

[Giulia King]

I'm happy you found something you liked, Yumna. Thank you for reading :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Gullia 😊