A Poem by Giulia King

The promise of tomorrow hung in the air, 
 Like crisp morning dew. 
 I wet my pen with ink as black as my soul.
 I stare at the blank paper.
 You gave me a poem to write. 
 A new chapter has unfold. 
 Still, the visions of us never stopped. 
 This suffocating silence haunts me. 
 May my tormented soul find peace.
 May my ink lead me somewhere kind.

© 2019 Giulia King

Author's Note

Giulia King
A recent heartbreak made me write again.
But something wonderful will come out of this, right? -Right.

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A person who endeavors to write(to be this kind of artist) has had to make trek through pain, but the act is a remedy to the myalgia. Good work!

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Did you find “ wonderful “ Giulia ?
You put over the pain of heartbreak very well :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

Powerful lines, great imaginary

Posted 2 Years Ago

Well I can say how much I can relate. Heart breaks give you words that means allot than it’s usual vocabulary. Haven’t asked any one to have a read at my poems. But may be you could have a look and find peace in knowing you ain’t the only one.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Artwork and words. Dear Giulia. You made the reader feel the words and they understood them.
"May my tormented soul find peace.
May my ink lead me somewhere kind."
I believe when we reach the dead-end, we must find some kind of light. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 3 Years Ago

As Cobain once said, "thank you tragedy. I needed you for my art"

Seems like heart ache can inspire more than other intense emotions.
But be wary of the melancholy muse.

Enjoyed it.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Tears transform into ink, which in turn will write a beautiful story for the future. After rain, the sun always shines :) Wonderfully done! Lots of hugs

Posted 4 Years Ago

my friend, your ink would surely laed you somewhere kind, lovely written.

Posted 4 Years Ago

The raw emotion is riveting. Heartbreaks can be a great motivation to a writer because when your are vulnerable you are honest. Your heart feels burdened unless you bleed those feeling out in form of words.

And yes, heartbreaks suck and everyone will tell you that it gets better in time. True. But I also believe that you can either wait for it to get better or you can get stronger.

Posted 4 Years Ago

I quite like this. The first two lines are my favorite.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Added on November 1, 2019
Last Updated on November 6, 2019


Giulia King
Giulia King

New York, NY



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